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Lesson 6: Hướng dẫn viết Agree or Disagree essay(Reading time: 7 - 14 minutes) Trong IELTS WRITING task 2, "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" là câu hỏi phổ biến nhất, đặc biệt là trong năm 2018 tỷ lệ xuất hiện câu hỏi dạng này lên đến khoảng gần 60%. Nhưng trước hết, bạn có hiểu ý nghĩa của cụm từ:"To what extent"? Show
Xây dựng dàn bài IELTS Writing Task 2 dạng bài đồng ý / không đồng ý sao cho hiệu quảNó được tạm dịch là "bạn đồng ý hay ko đồng ý đến mức độ nào?" Điều này có nghĩa là bạn có thể trả lời là bạn đồng ý hay không đồng ý hoàn toàn (not completely), và bạn có thể nói về cả "both sides of the argument." Có tổng cộng 2 cách tiếp cận chính cho dạng câu hỏi này:
CÁCH VIẾT CÂN BẰNGNhìn chung sẽ viết giống như dạng bài positive or negative cân bằng (xem lại lesson 5) DÀN BÀI TỔNG QUÁTIntroduction:General statement: paraphrase lại đề bài It is thought by some people that .... Thesis statement: trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài - nêu rõquan điểm cá nhânlà có điểm mình đồng ý nhưng cũng có điểm không đồng ý. Các cấu trúc câu phổ biến nhất để thể hiện ý này là: "While/ Although I agree that .., I believe/ disagree that..." "I agree that....., but I do not think that..." "To a certain extent, I agree that .... . However, I also think that ...." Body:(độ dài paragraph 1 phải tương đương paragraph 2 để thể hiện sự công bằng) Paragraph 1:Dùng cấu trúc song hành/ diễn dịch để giải thích lý do khiến mình agree.
Paragraph 2:Dùng cấu trúc song hành/ diễn dịch để giải thích lý do khiến mình disagree, hoặc những khía cạnh khác mà mình nghĩ cũng quan trọng.
Conclusion:In conclusion, while ...., I (do not) believe that ... Bài mẫu band 9 dạng ý kiến cân bằng Bài mẫu band 9 dạng ý kiến cân bằng
Paragraph 1: đồng ý là tiền rất quan trọng khi xem xét chọn nghề Dùng phương pháp diễn dịch:
Paragraph 2: tuy nhiên, những khía cạnh khác như mối quan hệ, không khí làm việc, thành tựu và nguyện vọng cũng quan trọng khi chọn nghề nghiệp Dùng phương pháp song hành:
Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. While I agree that money is a critical factor when deciding on a career, I believe that other factors are equally important. On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family. Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in the workplace are extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference in workers levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly, many peoples feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society. In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect peoples choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators. (275 words, band 9) (bài mẫu được trích dẫn từ ielts-simon.com) CÁCH VIẾT THIÊN LỆCHDÀN BÀI TỔNG QUÁTIntroduction:General statement: paraphrase lại đề bài It is a fact that .... Thesis statement: trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài - nêu rõ & trực tiếpquan điểm cá nhânlà có điểm mình đồng ý hay không đồng ý: Personally, I completely agree/ disagree with this idea. In my opinion, I am in agreement with this idea/ I am not in agreement with this idea. Body:Có tổng cộng 3 cách để bạn viết phần Body cho ý kiến nghiêng về một phía. Tuy nhiên, cách 1 & 2 dễ viết và bạn nên tập nhuần nguyễn hai cách này trước khi muốn viết theo cách 3 vốn là cách khó hơn.
Conclusion:Tuỳ theo mỗi cách viết thân bài sẽ có cách viết các conclusion khác nhau. Nhìn chung bạn cứ dựa vào cách thức Câu 1: parahrase lại câu thể hiện quan điểm của mình. Câu 2-3: tóm tắt và nói ngắn gọn các ý trong topic sentence 1 & 2. Bài mẫu band 9 dạng thiên lệch - Cách 1 Bài mẫu band 9 dạng thiên lệch - Cách 1
In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every university subject. The first reason for this is because having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males. In addition to the concern above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it would be wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications. In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and I believe that it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender. (268 words, band 9) (source: ielts-simon.com) Bài mẫu band 9 dạng thiên lệch - Cách 2 Bài mẫu band 9 dạng thiên lệch - Cách 2
Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with this view. For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay for private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount of tax reduction for these families, and the staff would be required to manage this complex process. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for public services that we may not use. For example, most people are fortunate enough not to have to call the police or fire brigade at any time in their lives, but they would not expect a tax reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax discount for sending their children to private schools, we might have a situation where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich. In my opinion, we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that supports public schools. It is beneficial for all members of society to have a high-quality education system with equal opportunities for all young people. This will result in a well-educated workforce and in turn a more productive and prosperous nation. Parents of children in private schools may also see the advantages of this in their own lives. For example, a company owner will need well qualified and competent staff, and a well-funded education system can provide such employees. In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for people who choose private education. (269 words, band 9) (bài mẫu được trích từ ielts-simon.com do Mr Simon viết) Bài mẫu band 9 dạng thiên lệch - Cách 3 Bài mẫu band 9 dạng thiên lệch - Cách 3
It is argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea. The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going, which means that the resident population already pays money to these sites through the tax system. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel. The governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to visit them. If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on holiday. To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor Castle or Saint Pauls Cathedral. These two sites charge the same price regardless of nationality, and this helps to promote the nations cultural heritage. If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important buildings. In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to attract tourists from overseas, and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local residents. (269 words, band 9) (source: ielts-simon.com) Tuỳ theo quan điểm của bạn đối với vấn đề nêu ra trong câu hỏi mà bạn chọn cách tiếp cận phù hợp.
1) Mở bài viết theo cách THIÊN LỆCH Some people believe that governments should not help senior citizens and elderly people should take care of themselves when they retire. I completely disagree with the idea that elderly people should receive no support from the state. 2) Mở bài viết theo cách CÂN BẰNG Some people believe that governments should not help senior citizens and elderly people should take care of themselves when they retire. Although I accept that we all have a responsibility to save money for retirement, I disagree with the idea that elderly people should receive no support from the state.
1) Mở bài viết theo cách THIÊN LỆCH Some people make their career choices according to what they enjoy doing, whereas others place more importance on earning a high salary. Personally, I support the view that job satisfaction and a sense of fulfillment are much more important than money. 2) Mở bài viếttheocách CÂN BẰNG Some people make their career choices according to what they enjoy doing, whereas others place more importance on earning a high salary. Personally, I believe that both criteria should be given equal consideration. Nguồn của 2 ví dụ trên: Mr Simon Thực hành viết Writing Task 2 và nhận phản hồi của giáo viên trong vòng 48hĐể bắt đầu làm bài, hãyclick vào đâybạn nhé. Tagged under ielts-writing ielts-writing-beginner ielts-grammar ielts-writing-task-2 agree-disagree-essay
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